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i have fingertips that like to pretend
they're guilty as sin

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you can sell me out if you want
put me up for auction
we'll see how much i buy.

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it's three words
that mean a hundred things.



a) spend forever with me
b) i like you with your clothes off
c) you looked better on tv
d) i am trying to get you off












e) all of the above.
©2009 ~eaglewarrio9
:iconeaglewarrio9:

Author's Comments

i probably won't do this again,
bare with me and i'll be right back.

[if you read this narci,
just know that
you sir, are a genius.]


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:iconthat-hippie-kid:
it's different, but i like it.
very very ice, rory.


--
wishes bounce me weightless.
the infa-red scope of pointlessness.
:iconsingmelovesongs:
your minds a menagerie,
its sprawled all over.
its beautiful.

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oh, dear.
:iconeaglewarrio9:
i'm the kind of open book
you spill your morning coffee on.
not because of awe, because of carelessness
and eight-thirty eyes.
:iconloopy-lexy:
i vote b)
i dream a)

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you are my sweetest downfall
i loved you first
:iconeaglewarrio9:
i'm most familiar with d),
i'll write more about my ex's sometime.
:iconeverlastingevenstar:
Interesting. Sort of different, but I still like it ^_^.

(Didn't you say you were 13? How many ex's do you have?! =P By the way, I am still surprised at your age and your writing ability. And your... understanding with some things. I hadn't experienced love or anything similar to you at your age - then again, I was a nerdy girl that people just stayed away from ;) ^_^ Still, I bet at as you go through teen years more, you'll probably see that you learn even more than now, but still... Gosh, I sound old. I'm not, I promise, I'm only like two weeks away from being 19 myself =P It's just that high school ages you somehow; I'm a freshman in college though. That's also interesting =P )

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You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no telling where you might be swept off to.
:iconlosingmyfaith:
different, but in a good way. i liked it.

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" ...he's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, his and mine are the same, and Linton's is as different as a moonbeam from lightning, or frost from fire."
:iconohsostarryeyed:
brilliant to excess.
[they say 'everything in moderation,' but i disagree.]

--
i like to
put haikus where they
don't belong.
:icondeidarasmodel:
Oh, this is beautiful. :)

Kind of says, I love you, but am I really all you want? Or is it just what I offer?

loooove it. :heart:

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sweetheart, i am NOT sorry.


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:iconsummernightangel:
it was short but it said everything it needed to.
i might have to try writing something similar. not too similar, however, as it will not be infused with your awesome factor. :heart:

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~summernightangel doesn't need a compass to know which way the wind is shining.

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